Usually when someone cuts out a picture from a newspaper they keep the description of what we are seeing intact. This one leaves us to our own imagination to figure things out.
It must be fairly old. Look at the door of the vehicle she is exiting from. Tall windows, plush leather seating. It could almost be a Cinderella type horse drawn carriage, but I imagine it has an engine.
Is she really that cold? And what's with the guy helping her out? Turkish hat, long beard, and robes. She can see the photographer, looking straight at him. Possibly resignation. Her picture might get taken often. But who is she? This sounds like the opening of a book. A mystery. And we'll make sure to write into our story the cute boy in the cap in the background. I like it. Solid start.
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